Chelsea Bixby- The Unheard of Case- Chapter 2

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asked Aug 28, 2016 in Fiction by jazzlinny (39,180 points)

Downstairs, Chelsea used her fork to pick at her dim sum. 

    "Chelsea, you've got to eat."

  Chelsea didn't reply. 

    "Dad, and now Maggie. What could be worse?" Chelsea mumble

Chelsea's mom was silent. She was lost from words.

Chelsea got up and stomped up the stairs and slammed the door behind her. 


Chelsea didn't reply. She was curled up in her closet crying.

"Chelsea?" Her mom said

No reply

Her mother sighed, "Chelsea, please come down." 

Still no reply.

Chelsea's mom walked up to her room and put her ear to the door.

Sob. Sob. Sob.

She knocked on Chelsea's door and let herself in.

"Chelsea, I know it's hard but don't put it too hard on yourself. These things, they happen." She slung her arm around Chelsea and looked into her black eyes. "This is not the Chelsea I know."

Chelsea looked up at her mother and smiled. "You know, you are like no one else, right?"

Her mother smiled. "Thanks! I think."

And at 11:00p.m. at night, one of the only things you could see was Chelsea and her mom smiling.


1 Answer

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answered Aug 28, 2016 by rae (88,730 points)
Why are her eyes black? They'd have to genetically be only really dark brown; nobody has solid black eyes unless they're a certain breed of dog. Also, is this the one where her friend gets run over because I'm confused as there're so many stories like this I'm lost
commented Aug 28, 2016 by jazzlinny (39,180 points)
Yeah, the one with the car.

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