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The Legend of Lord Varik, Chapter 1: The King's Plea.

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asked Oct 4, 2016 in Fiction by Cow Boy (32,360 points)
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   It was a cold, snowy day in the land of Volkhair.

Though that did not seem to stop the very important meeting between the Silver Lords. This seemingly important meeting wasn't exactly a meeting at all. It was more of a debate between King Orak, and Lord Varik.These angry men were debating over the decision to go to war with the Vikings of the North, until a young peasant named Tarko came with some bad news about the Queen Kalia. The peasant then delivered a note to the King.

This is what the note said: ''My dearest Orak, I am very sorry to say this, but I have been captured by the Vikings, and they plan to take me to a prison camp in the Barbaric country of Candalor. If you could send one of your Silver Lords to rescue me, I would be very grateful''.


''Sincerely, Queen Kalia.''

   After the King read thletter, he was deeply troubled. The King now urged the Silver Lords more than ever, to declare war on the Vikings. The King then made a big request to the Lords. He asked one of the lords to rescue the Queen, and to take down the evil Viking King.

 

This was just a draft, so not all the punctuation will be correct (FYI)

 

-SERGEANTYAK



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answered Oct 4, 2016 by ❤️GryffindorGal❤️ (115,780 points)
Looking good!
commented Oct 4, 2016 by Cow Boy (32,360 points)
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answered Oct 4, 2016 by TylerTheDrummer (74,210 points)
Nice story!
commented Oct 5, 2016 by Cow Boy (32,360 points)
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answered Oct 5, 2016 by #Cindystrong-Sky (14,420 points)
Love it!​
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