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Sneak Peak at Danger Over the Walls

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asked Oct 21, 2016 in Fiction by GymnastPower (36,980 points)
"That's weird Q...but it's cute" Mara says smiling. They swung hangs and laughed together. I was happy Mara was finally happy- even if Ryan was hurt.  I stared at Steve. "So, what does it feel like...?" He frowns "It feels like there's a  really annoying nugget bothering me about it." He tried to hide his smile. I was proud of him. I glance at Quinn who sticks her tongue out and yells "NUGGET!". Mara tugs her onto the bench with her. "They're cute together." Steve says. "Yeah. It's a little weird, we're best friends, and it's like I'm in 2nd place..." Hearing this, Steve laughed "You were always in second place, you short legged nugget"


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answered Oct 22, 2016 by ❤️GryffindorGal❤️ (117,220 points)
Why do you keep making new versions of DOW?!?!??! It is super confusing and a bit annoying!
commented Oct 22, 2016 by ONE
I thinks she's revising it and making it better. You know regional at best twenty one pilots? That was remastered. Into vessel. it's really small differences: Guns for Hands and really big ones: Trees. I think she's trying to find a version she's happy with. It's not annoying, it's simply her being a real writer. No writers can writer something that has zero flaws and is simply loved. Unless your an editor. Stop being so hard on her. She's said in older post she was depressed.

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