Cool Cat| Chapter 1 | JazziGrangerRaven<3 [closed]

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Oomph. I sat on the couch like a potato. I was so tired. Just as I was about to sleep, I heard a scream. 

   Uh oh. Wait, right. I'm not supposed to be here. Oh, all right then. I flop down and waddle to my soft pillow engraved with: 

   Mr. FluffyPants

   Horrible, right? I wish I was a TIGER. Not Mr. FluffyPants.

   I fell into a deep sleep. Early the next day, my eyes opened. Food.

   GOBBLE. GOBBLE. GOBBLE. Yum yum yum!!! I wish I could replay this moment forever. I love being a cat.

 

Should I continue?

closed with the note: I dont like it anymore.
asked Nov 15, 2016 in Fiction by jazzlinny (35,790 points)
reshown Nov 16, 2016 by jazzlinny


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I think you could write a bit better but I think I can understand you trying to be a cat. It sounds like a good story, though. You should continue!
answered Nov 16, 2016 by ❤☮LouTheLuver☮❤ (153,130 points)

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