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The Boy and His Dog Against The Wild Chapter 2

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asked Jan 24, 2017 in Books by TylerTheDrummer (75,190 points)
edited Jan 8, 2018 by TylerTheDrummer
After Joey and Todd headed out they didn't know but, they were going the wrong way! But then later, they heard something moving in the bushes, then Joey said in his mind "it's probably a squirrel or a rabbit".  But after that, Todd barked, then Joey said "I said it was a squirrel or something, so calm down". Then, spontaneously, some bandits jumped out of the bushes and said "don't move muscle!!" then he told one of the other bandits "grab the kid and carry him to our longship", "I'll get the dog" said the leader of the bandits. Joey said "a longship?" then the leader of the bandits said "yes, a longship why is that so surprising? You never heard of the word longship?" then Joey grunted.  Joey kept on hitting the bandit that carried him to their longship.  Meanwhile, Joey's parents were out looking for Joey, then a guy said is this the kid?  Then said "come here John" then already the parents said "that's not him, because his name is John."  then that guy brought a kid that looked like he was 12.  Then the guy said he is a 11 year old named John, is that him?  Then, the parents said "no that's not him.....ours is nine years old".  Then Joey's mom started crying, " then said said will we ever find him?" then Joey's Dad said "we will, don't worry."

 

I hope you liked this story.  Be on the lookout for chapter 3!


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answered Jan 17 by kitten (628,320 points)
great writing!

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