The Elemental Chimeras-Blaze-Chapter Two

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"Welcome to class, Blaze!," said Blaze's science teacher Mr. O'Coal. As Blaze took his seat, his best friend Scarlet greeted him. "When's the homework due?," said Blaze. His science homework was to write an essay about the volcanos in his village. "It's due next Dyadday.," said Scarlet. In the Fire Chimera culture, a dyadday is equivalent to a Tuesday.

"Okay class, turn to page 123 in your science textbooks.," said Mr. O'Coal. They did. "Read the pages by yourself then answer the questions.," said Mr. O'Coal.

Then, a spear was shot through a hole in the cave! General McFlame who wore a hollow volcanic rock as a helmet jumped out of the hole and said. "Me and my troops are warring against the Water Chimeras!," said General McFlame. "School is dismissed. We cannot learn in battleground. Go back home and help seal your cave.," said Mr. O'Coal.
asked Feb 25, 2017 in Fiction by L (69,440 points)


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Not too bad! But maybe you should lengthen the story. And maybe with the Chimeras' names you can do "fire" in another language for one of them. Creative story tho!
answered Feb 25, 2017 by -GEMHeart- (234,770 points)

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