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Heres a Song I Made Called The Way Of Life

+9 votes
128 views
asked Mar 1, 2017 in Other by -Moonlight- (64,550 points)

​Verse: 1! Sometimes its hard When no ones listen.......But You Got to live with it! because its the Way of life. Verse: 2! Sometimes its sad when everyone's  Crying but you got to Help them up because their not Trying and you got to tell them  that their not dying! BUT YOU GOT TO LIVE WITH IT !! cause it the way of liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiife!

 
 
I hope you liked this song please comment down below if you liked this song

 

commented Oct 11, 2018 by luna midnight
try rewriting it like this:

Sometimes when it's hard

When no one listens (hold)

But you got to live with it!

Because that's the way of life

 

Sometimes it's sad when everyone's cryin'

but you got to,

Help them up!

because their not tryin'

and you got to tell them that their not dyin'

BUT YOU GOT TO LIVE WITH IT!

cause that's the way of life.(hold "i")

it looks more pro this way. good song though! also make it a little longer, a short song is like a cliffhanger on a book. try this format:

intro

refrain

verse 1

refrain

interlude

verse 2

refrain

interlude

coda


1 Answer

+1 vote
answered Mar 2, 2017 by ❤☮LouTheLuver☮❤ (160,530 points)
selected Mar 3, 2017 by -Moonlight-
 
Best answer
Really like the inspriration! With a chorus, it'll sound much better!

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