Chapter 2 of Moonlight

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          Chapter 2 

My sandals pounded on the sidewalk.I was late for school. Of course I looked like I just woke up.Which was partly true.

 When I arrived at school, my best friend Indi gave me a weird look.As I sat down, I asked," What did I miss?" .She said " Nothing.Nothing at all." Then I was the one who gave her a weird look.

" Cold burgers and soggy fries,as usual" I muttered to myself as I sat down at a lunch table." Now where"s Indi?"   

What I saw really confused me.A lot.

 

asked May 18, 2017 in Other by Vanilla Bean (75,340 points)


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What's she gonna find out?
Hmmmm.....O_o

answered May 18, 2017 by ❤☮LouTheLuver☮❤ (134,530 points)
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Brilliant, but can you make the chapters a little longer? A thing that helps me is writing down my chapter and revising it. To get more ideas, brainstorm! Nice story, all the same!
answered May 18, 2017 by -GEMHeart- (146,020 points)
Thanks for the advice!

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