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Chapter 2 of Moonlight

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asked May 18, 2017 in Other by Vanilla Bean (85,760 points)

          Chapter 2 

My sandals pounded on the sidewalk.I was late for school. Of course I looked like I just woke up.Which was partly true.

 When I arrived at school, my best friend Indi gave me a weird look.As I sat down, I asked," What did I miss?" .She said " Nothing.Nothing at all." Then I was the one who gave her a weird look.

" Cold burgers and soggy fries,as usual" I muttered to myself as I sat down at a lunch table." Now where"s Indi?"   

What I saw really confused me.A lot.

 



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answered May 18, 2017 by -GEMHeart- (290,270 points)
Brilliant, but can you make the chapters a little longer? A thing that helps me is writing down my chapter and revising it. To get more ideas, brainstorm! Nice story, all the same!
commented May 19, 2017 by Vanilla Bean (85,760 points)
Thanks for the advice!
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answered May 18, 2017 by ❤☮LouTheLuver☮❤ (162,720 points)

What's she gonna find out?
Hmmmm.....O_o

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