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i have always seen things differently than other people. like when every body wants money more more more i wished money had never been invented so there was no such thing as the poor. i thought about stuff like this for a while and wrote a song about it.so here it is:

i am young

and i hope for a day

that will never come

with peace on earth

no one hungry or thirsty

cold or burning

homeless or at war

and that day will never come

(here is the chorus in[ ]) [ oh how could i be so naive and hopeful

for a day that will never come]

i am older now

and younger then

but there is something that we share;

we both hope for a day that will never come

(chorus)

and that day that will never come,

can come

with your help and mine, together we can make the world shine

and that day that will never come,will come (end song)

 

so that is it. please don't critize it.



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I think the song is great, so is the message.
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i wish people could things see the way i do about that stuff
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Everyone sees things in their own way. You just have to get your thoughts out there, it's like what they say, "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder"
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i just wish there was more than one beholder
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Do not be afraid to be bold and uniqe :)
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Thanks
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thumbs_up great!

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that's goooooooooooooooooood.
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by (415k points)
That's a good song!



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