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mlp fanfic/ Astell chapter one

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asked Oct 16, 2018 in Luna's My Little Pony Club by LUNA MLP LOVER /LUNA MIDNIGHT

Luna and Celestia were out on a walk in ponyville, when suddenly they were captured! They fell alsleep unwillingly. When they woke up they were in the castle of the two sisters; Celestia was in cuffs and chains, while Luna was free exept for the locked door. Luna tried to use magic to unlock the door, but it would not work. Celestia tried and that would not work either. "I'm afraid that won't work," said a strange new voice. "It can't be," Celestia whispered, Luna and Celestia thought they had been alone. they looked to were the strange voice came from.The pony stepped out of the shadows. Celestia gasped at the sight of her, for she knew that exact pony. "Am I a familer sight Celestia?" said the stranger. "I don't get it, who is that, sister?" asked Luna. "Oh, you never mensioned me Celestia?" the pony said." Tell her Celestia, she deserives to know." "Luna, this is Astell, our older sister." said Celestia.


here is my new fanfic. also here is astell:



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answered Oct 16, 2018 by im kanye (374,590 points)
So good!! Great job!! I can't wait to see more of this!!
commented Oct 17, 2018 by LunaLight (133,380 points)

Thanks!bow

commented Oct 17, 2018 by im kanye (374,590 points)
No problem!!

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