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I think your character, Lulumoon, is too standoffish. Can you please tone her down a bit? Because she's so "out there" it's possible she may overshadow the other characters. You need to make her a bit more normal so that fits in as a side character (she's not a main, and can't be because the story has already started and we have our 3 mains established). Please edit her a bit. You can keep her eyes and personality, but make her clothes a bit more like Hogwarts (they wear plain robes, and they aren't allowed to wear normal clothes cept on off days). Also, she is sorta overshadowing Asia because she appears so much (she seems to be hanging with Tom a lot). So please when you request her to be in, please tone her actions and everything down.

 

Hope you understand! I want the mains to stay as main characters, not be pushed off so that Lulumoon can be the main.



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by (165k points)
ok. maybe i could make a story on her side so it doesn't interfere. knight can still put her in your story as a side but this way she can still be a side and main.
by (350k points)
NO! We have already developed a story and if Lulumoon comes in NOW, it'll disrupt EVERYTHING! We have tried hard on this story. Not to be mean, Lulumoon CAN ONLY BE A SIDE CHARACTER! Please understand this! We can't have 3 authors, plus, Knight and I are planning this on KidzNet vía private messages and you won't be able to put your ideas in. Plus Knight and I have been HP fans for years and we know a TON about the series.

 

Sorry to be mean but that's how it has to be!
by (165k points)
1 it would be a dif story that the only connection to silens it has would be her. tom or even hp if you want would not be metioned.

2 I'M ON KIDZNET NOW!!!
by (350k points)
I don't really want anyone branching off with other characters and making totally different stories. Silens I is the jest story I have been really passionate about and I don't want that ruined.
by (165k points)
mine wouldn't have anything to do with hp or silens
by (165k points)
so basiclly midnight can never amount up to anything besides a side charecter. so the entire idea of her is ruined. sorry if i'm mean
by (415k points)
I agree, Gem. There was no connection what so ever with Midnight and Asia, and them being friends in another book wouldn't go so well, mostly  because Asia is already friends with Tom and Lucas and Tom's and Midnight's personality is the same as Tom

s. I think without a character like Lucas isnt good for making a story with those two character personality types. This is also the first story I'm REALLY passionate about, and if I'm, an my characters, aren't a part of something me and Gem made, then I don't know. Also, Asia is a HP character. And, if you are making another story, even if it doesn't have my characters in it, Tom and Lucas already have some sort of relation with Asia. I think that you need to consult me. Think about it, if someone was to take your story idea but take your characters out, how would you feel? Wouldn't that be a bit of plagiarism even if the other story writer is writing with you? I dunno, in my opinion. And did you want to write this story with Gem?

That makes me kinda feel left out if Gem really did take your plans into consideration.

Also, is Lucas still going to be in it? Did you mean for you and Gem to write the story? I want to know your plan and plot for the story. I want to know what your ideas are. Also, I suggest you scroll through my fiction club if you'd like to know a little more about the plot planning. I would just like to know what you have in mind even though I won't be apart of the story!
by (350k points)
Luna, Midnight is just a side character. If you wanted to write another story with her, you'd have to complete reskin her. Sure, keep the personality but you couldn't keep her history or anything. And yes it is basically plagiarism...

Knight and I are writing this and we only want 2 authors.

I am giving permission to write a SHORT STORY with Lulumoon, but you'd have to change her quite a bit!

I hope this doesn't hinder our friendship!
by (415k points)
I think we could still try to make your request. I'll just have to talk to Gem about it!
by (165k points)
1. did i get approved for that yet?

2. i was planning on making a story about Midnight alone on a quest to find her father with no relation to silens or hp. Gem said i couldn't because she is already in silens, as a side. so basicly she can never exsist to be more than a side charecter.
by (350k points)
You can let her go on a quest, and keep her name and everything, but she can't have any magic or anything. Otherwise you're approved for a story.
by (415k points)
Yes, you get approved! Hmm, if Gem doesn't approve of it, then there is nothing I can do. You'd have to talk to Gem about it though.
by (165k points)
didn't plan on her having magic. maybe i will make her be friends with a couple other ocs (of mine) along the way
by (350k points)
I'm coming back to read this and I'm sorry I got so mean. I was just really passionate, heh....
by (415k points)
Me too.



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