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Rise of the Wolves Chapter 7 (I think)

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asked Jan 16, 2019 in Writers Club by Overcomer of Dark (7,860 points)

  Here is a quick heads up, this chapter can get very confusing and you may need to ask questions if need be, that's fine, anything to help under stand the story. Let's get on with it anyway.

 


Luna walked about her pack territory, looking around at the other pups playing, some hunters training, some wolves bringing back food for the pack, and the Omega and Beta sitting next to the Alpha, the Omgea on the grass while Alpha and Beta were on a high rock.

   She accidently bumped into one of the hunters sitting on the grass because neither were paying any attension. "S-sorry Sir" Luna said to the hunter she walked into ("Sir" as to there had never yet been a female hunter). Luna sat down. "It's all good, what's your name little pup?" The wolf said to Luna. "My name is Luna" Luna said. "What's your name Sir?" Luna said to the hunter wolf. "Bolt" The hunter wolf replied and bowing a little to show Luna a mark simaliar to a lightning bolt on his left ear.

  Their conversation quickly ended by intruders coming into the pack territory: A hyena, 3 wolves (possibly Alpha, Beta, and Delta of another pack), and a fox that walked slightly astray from the rest, these animals could possibly have been a mixed pack. The larger of the intruding wolves stepped a little toward Luna's Alpha. The hunters, Alpha, Beta, and Delta growled as if to say "Don't come any closer". "Who are you and why have you come to our territory?" The Alpha spoke to the intruders in a grave serious voice. The wolf that had stepped closer seemed oddly calm. The Omega tried getting some of the younger pups to safety, but didn't see Luna. who at the time was backing up into the crowd of wolves.

  "Why so tense? You knew I would come eventually, Titan," the lead intruding wolf said to the Alpha, as the Alpha's real name was Titan, but no one in the pack would call their leader anything but Alpha. Some of the wolves looked up confused at the Alpha, who was not confused at all. "Why have you come now?" The Alpha said. The Alpha jumped down from his rock and started slowly walking toward the lead intruder. The intruder smiled and some of the other intruders walked a few steps toward the pack. "You know why, dear brother," The intruder said to Alpha, all of the wolves were confused now. "You have no right to be in this territory," Alpha said. "Oh, but one does wish to visit his pack-" The intruder started, then got interupted by Alpha, "FORMER pack! You are no longer allowed on this pack's territory, as you are a traitor to all wolves here!" The Alpha said angryly with his canine fangs showing. The smile turned into an angry frown on the intruder, by now the lead intruder and Alpha were face-to-face.

  "It is still my pack, and I have done no such thing as to betray this pack, I would have been Alpha instead of you, but they threw me out. And so now I have this pack of misfits-" The intruder nodded to the other 2 wolves, fox, and hyena that were with him, "- and you have my pack, tell me, how does that work? How did I get thrown out for nothing, and you got everything for no reason?" The lead intruder said in a steady but mad voice."I'm done talking." The Alpha said before trying to lunge for the lead intruder out of anger.

  Then it became a red blur, the intruders were fighting the pack, and it didn't look like the intruders were losing. Luna ran toward the forest, and started running as fast as her legs would go, and running, and running in the forest, away from her pack's war.


Uh oh, CLIFFHANGER.

commented Aug 20, 2019 by lunalovegoodmolly (245,170 points)
Did some time pass from the last chapter then?
commented Aug 20, 2019 by Overcomer of Dark (7,860 points)
About a couple hours time period yes,
commented Aug 21, 2019 by lunalovegoodmolly (245,170 points)
Ok. That's what I thought


1 Answer

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answered Jan 17, 2019 by -GEMHeart- (279,040 points)
Hi, are you Luna?
commented Jan 17, 2019 by -GEMHeart- (279,040 points)
Also, didn't you add Knight and me as a character?
commented Jan 17, 2019 by toad aka star (342,160 points)
Most likely is Luna!
commented Jan 18, 2019 by Overcomer of Dark (7,860 points)
Yes this is Luna. I have two accounts, I had LunaWinter and luna midnight and I changed LunaWinter to Fallen Dark Angel
commented Jan 18, 2019 by Overcomer of Dark (7,860 points)
And Gem, I am still building up the story A bit, but I will try to add you guys soon.

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