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New Cover For Rise of The Wolves!

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asked May 5, 2019 in Fiction by Luna

Here is the new cover, what it looked like halfway done and the finished version.

Halfway :

Finished :

And here was the original one :

I like my new  one better because the first one was just clipart on a pre-made background, the second one I based off the clipart but made my own and I used a pixil fill to fill in everything,, and it looks better.

commented Aug 20, 2019 by lunalovegoodmolly (246,290 points)
I like it. Good work!


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answered May 6, 2019 by -GEMHeart- (279,170 points)
Great job, about to read the new chapters!

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