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MEET THE CHARACTERS:

Anwil
A stuck-up elf who is naturally inclined to hate people because he "didn't take after his race and become an elegant rich boy". He feels he is underprivileged. He's the main character, but he doesn't know that (if he did, he'd be even more of an egoist). While his self-righteousness doesn't show all the time, it does surface when people need reminding he isn't the best guy in the world. Sure, he's good-looking, but don't tell him that.
 
Appearance: A tall elf with a nice build. Has red hair fit of a shampoo commercial, which is always styled as "rich-boy tussle". Anyway, he's got green eyes and a face that reminds you of a Shojo Bishie character or a male model. Sure, he could be a model, but what he really wants is money and fame. Oh well, why not waste a good character by making him such a narcissist?!?! 
 
Snowyl Aomidori
She's the type of person you would rather have on your side than at your throat with a knife, or anything that could be a weapon (including a stick or a needle). She's an accomplished assassin, the "woman with the highest bounty on her head and most kills in the 3 kingdoms" and is charged, as a Liyau, to protect Shii Eyu. She's very blood-thirsty, and has unbelievable control of her body and any bladed or blunt weapon. But it is a wonder she hasn't been caught yet, since she's hunted by bounty hunters and other assassins whenever they like. All that aside, she's quite a good bodyguard. 
 
Appearance: A beautiful 19 year old with teal hair and ocean eyes. You could easily mistake her for a princess or angel, before she kills you. Oh well, better off seeing the girl of your dreams before seeing the light, eh? She wears a head to toe black suit, with a robe adorned with weapons over it. 
 
Shii
A cute little girl protected by Aomidori. She looks maybe seven, but she's probably the most likely out of the three to be awarded "Most Saintly" or "Best Morals". She believes in what's right and isn't afraid to tell Aomidori to shut up in the middle of a brawl. She's very nice, the kind of kid that stays on the Nice List no matter what she does because no one doubts her angelic saintliness. But anyway, she's just a sweet girl in an unfortunate circumstance. 
 
Appearance: White hair and ocean eyes. The kind of kid you'd see dressed up in candy cane Lolita in Japan year-round. Her eyes are huge, almost freakishly huge. For some reason, she always wrecks up her clothes to the point of them looking like beggar's clothes, but Aomidori is generous enough to buy her more. 

 

 

 

 

 

CHAPTER 1:

https://www.kidzsearch.com/questions/44451/the-chronicles-of-white-raven-part-1

https://www.kidzsearch.com/questions/44476/the-chronicles-of-white-raven-part-2-of-chapter-1

https://www.kidzsearch.com/questions/44478/the-chronicles-of-white-raven-part-3-of-chapter-1



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