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Loca Novis Chapter One (Chp by ArtistGirl)

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asked Sep 18, 2019 in Fiction by im kanye (371,520 points)

A/N: So, ArtistGirl on KN asked me to post her chapter (on Fiction Club) do not credit me, but comment nice things to her because this chapter is written by her. This is a good chapter, don't you agree? teeth_smile




Chapter One

The girl lay in the middle of the field. She was breathing. She was alive. But she was not awake. She hadn’t been awake for a long time. A whole year. She had been in a coma-like sleep. Predators came and sniff her. But they did not eat her. For she was encased in a bubble of water. Made by herself to protect herself. She was sleeping forever. This had happened to many before her. But few survived. They had gone out of their minds.

Teleportation can do that to people.
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Alexa opened her eyes. She checked the alarm clock by her bed. 5:53. Time to wake up. She forced herself to get out of bed. As she looked in the mirror and saw her ordinary face, with its tangled brown hair and tan skin, she told herself, ‘Just another ordinary day in my same old ordinary life.’ . Maybe the beginning of the day was ordinary, but as the day went by, Alexa realized that there could hardly be anything less ordinary.

The beginning of the school day went along normally. Until it got to recess.

A group of girls was standing around, laughing and having four different conversations..
“Alexa, do you wanna trade a sparkly pink gel pen for this metallic teal?”
“Josie, look over there. Do you think that guy is cute?”
“Cathy, do you want to go to the mall on Saturday?”
“Bella, listen to this new album.”

Suddenly, the ground began to shake. “EARTHQUAKE!” came a yell from a crazed boy running in circles.

“An earthquake?”
“In Virginia?”
“I don’t think so.”

Alexa thought in a second. ‘Not possible. Not in Virginia. There’s an earthquake. SAVE YOURSELF, ALEXA!’

A large crack appeared across the blacktop. It widened and spread farther until it got to Alexa’s feet. She tried to steady herself. She failed, and plummeted in.
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The girl opened her eyes. She was inside a huge bubble of water. ‘How did this get around me? She asked herself. ‘And who am I?’

Then her memory flooded back to her. “Alexa. My name is Alexa Ford. I am fifteen. I have a giant bubble of water around me. I am trying my best to not freak out. I am NOT SUCCEEDING!!!’

She raised her hand and the water bubble disappeared, leaving Alexa shocked. ‘What’s wrong with me? Why can I do that- and how? Have I gone CRAZY? What time is it now? I must’ve missed dinner.’ She checked her watch. ‘No… it can’t be… I haven’t just missed dinner! I… I’ve missed a whole year of dinners. I’m sixteen. I’m somewhere in a strange field, and I have no freakin’ idea WHAT’S HAPPENING TO ME!?!?!?!?!



World created by AristGirl and me, chapter my ArtistGirl. 



1 Answer

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answered Sep 18, 2019 by -GEMHeart- (282,790 points)
Very cool! Thanks for posting it here, Knight, makes it easier to read. Good job AG!
commented Sep 18, 2019 by im kanye (371,520 points)
Np! I agree. :-D
commented Nov 12, 2019 by forgxtten_chiLd (47,700 points)
thank you!

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