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How Should I Mix Chronicles of White Raven and Shrouded?

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asked Oct 23, 2019 in Other by -GEMHeart- (279,240 points)
I want to mix them, but I want to remove some of the major plot details and characters from CoWR. I think I may make Frost'sea the main character and Anwil is still a character but he's in much later. While I think he's an interesting protagonist, I think he would be a fascinating side character. And I don't know if I''ll add Shii and Snowyl in... any suggestions?


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answered Oct 24, 2019 by -GEMHeart- (279,240 points)
Thanks guys! Yes, I meant like to mix the stories as the same world.

I feel like I made a mistake with Anwil's crisis and plot...
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answered Oct 23, 2019 by lunalovegoodmolly (246,880 points)
like CoWR like it is. But it is up to you.... Maybe make it one of those things were there is some of the same characters but very little conection... Up to you.
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answered Oct 23, 2019 by Kitten (566,320 points)
What do you mean by mix them? Have the story characters meet up or mixing the two into one big story?

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