Here, I edited just a little bit. :) May I ask what clan (canon/your own) the cats are in?
And I created some more cats for filler characters just in case you wanna use or edit them.
NAME: Songkit (kit), Songpaw (apprentice), Songwhisper (warrior)
DESCRIPTION: A black cat with silver stripes on her tail only. Is very small. Has teal eyes, with a bit of silver underlining them.
PERSONALITY: Shy and sweet. Is easily pushed around by older cats but stands up for herself aganist cats her size and smaller. Is known for being sarcastic towards them when they are being offensive. As she grows up, she gets more confident.
NOTES: Was named Songkit because her first words of her older siblings' song that they sang as she was born. When she was born, she had a hard time learning to hunt (which caused her family and clan members to have little faith in her) but later became a top hunter when she became an apprentice.
NAME: Smokekit (kit), Smokepaw (apprentice), Smokeheart (warrior)
DESCRIPTION: White tom cat with a splash of dark grey on his chest. Has dark amber eyes.
PERSONALITY: A bit of a bully. Likes to annoy the younger kits and apprentices since he is 11 moons old and brags about becoming a warrior. Is sorta insecure but acts very mean towards Songkit/any apprentices younger than him.
NAME: Leafkit (kit), Leafpaw (apprentice), Leafstorm (warrior)
GENDER: Tom cat.
APPEARANCE: Light brown cat with dark flecks dotting his pelt. Very lean and grows up to be an extremely strong cat,
PERSONALITY: Relatively calm. Is described as having a plain personality.