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DANGER OVER THE WALLS: Chapters 3,4.

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asked May 10, 2015 in English by GymnastPower (36,940 points)

CHAPTER 3~~~~~~~

 

Fernanada and I start down the dark street. I hold on to my handle bars tight. Letting go could kill her, and maybe even kill me if the bike flipped over. We are getting closer, I just know it! I look to my right and spot a sign that had the words: FLORIDIA AIRPORT 30 MILES AWAY. WATCH FOR CRASHING PLANES!. I steer over into grass. We'll continue on grass, just in case.

 

CHAPTER 4

 

I am pretty sure I've  drove 10 miles in the last 2 hours. I am starting to worry, about Fern. She has been sleeping for some time, now. I take one hand off the bar and poke her. She groans. I break my bike. Now that we have stopped, we can eat.

 

Suddenly I hear gunshots! I turn to look, but what I see is something I thought I would never.

 



2 Answers

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answered May 13, 2015 by riverfree

IT'S a nice story. I would like to hear more

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answered May 13, 2015 by GymnastPower (36,940 points)
CLIFF HANGER! :3 You just can comment what you think to far of the story
commented May 13, 2015 by whizkid (66,060 points)
Would like to see some talking between characters at some point, but really like it so far!
commented May 13, 2015 by GymnastPower (36,940 points)
The talking starts a soon. This is just action mostly

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