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Danger Over the Walls (9,10)

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asked May 28, 2015 in English by GymnastPower (38,570 points)

Chapter 9

Maya

 

  I was unsure about Steve at first. Now I am sure he is no good. I slap him off me of me. He looks at me as if he is hurt. I slap him as hard as I can, tears began rolling out my eyes. He turned away. I wanted to run. I wanted to run, hide and get away. Knowing the man who was my father wasn't important anymore. I had to live.

 

 

Chapter 10

Steve

 

 I was scared. I eased to my seat. Yes. She has slapped you, Steve.  I hated working for Her.  It was her mission to kill Maya, and her father. Why? Over some joke in High School. She said that Maya's Mom worked with her. I had seen Mrs.Valdezi around, but I never thought she was with the group.

 

 I forgot about all Her orders were and drove. Far. I didn't know where I was.  Suddenly I wreaked into a palm tree. Fernanda, went flying though the air. I thought, please don't let her die. Please.  Fern was thrown into the back. Maya was going to be crushed.  The palm tree moved around. It began to tilt. It was falling. We were going to die. I moved myself over to Maya and Kissed her, on the lips. I was so shocked, so was she. Then just as it was falling, the kiss ended. I crawled under the wheel.

"MAYA! GET UNDER!"

"I want to save fern!"

 

She grabbed Fern and put her under with her just as the tree slammed into the car.



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answered May 29, 2015 by SnoWolfPretzelz

WOW. Again, is ur character girl or boy?

commented May 29, 2015 by GymnastPower (38,570 points)
The story is told from 2 different points of view Steve is a Boy. Maya is. A girl. Fern is girl
commented May 30, 2015 by rae (88,750 points)

Si, SnoWolfPretzelz. Tu deberia leer el nombres que decir: Steve, y, Maya. Aprender a leer.

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