The barrier

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Chapter 4?? (I lost count)

Steve

Maya and Niles chat in the corner. I feel my face turn bright red. I stand up and walk up to Niles and scream "I WISH YOU WOULD STOP!" Maya stands up and screams back "STEVE CAN YOU JUST STOP? I CAN TALK TO NILES IF I WANT TO!" I punch Niles in the face causing him to fall over on top of maya. "Steve. How. Could. You. Do. This?" Maya walks over to Niles and starts nursing and banages his face with his shirt. I walk over to Maya and try to hug her "go away Steve. You've done enough." I walk to the corner to get some sleep. I can't sleep. I look over to see maya sleeping.  I carefully craw over to her and lay beside her. Wrapping my hands around her she wakes up. She tried to undo my hands but I won't let her. she stops trying and just tries waking up Niles, he wakes up but before she can say anything I kiss her to stop her. She turns away from me. She hates me, yet she won't slip out. I let go of her. She doesn't move. Niles walks over and wispers , "you, me. Now." Wrap my hands around maya again. Niles kicks me in my back. I find myself slowly falling asleep. When I finally wake up Maya is being dragged away. Dead. Oh my god! "Maya!" I scream! I am being held down by cement. Niles is pouring more wet cement on me. I can't move. I hear the my mothers voice saying "You did this." I scream even louder repeating "ITS NOT MY FAULT! ITS NOT MY FAULT!" Everything goes black. My eyes shut. But  maya was dead-  how is she back over there. Everyone stares at me. Maya makes the first move. She walks over to me and hugs me and says "It was a dream."
asked Sep 27, 2015 in English by GymnastPower (32,840 points)


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Wow. That was DEEP. Did you put a sort of logic behind the dream that we've to figure out?
answered Oct 19, 2015 by rae (82,750 points)

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