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Danger Over the Walls (12?)

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asked Dec 6, 2015 in English by GymnastPower (36,980 points)

Steve

I feel awkard crying in front of my girlfriend, but my dad, that's a totally different subject. I brush my tears away and stand up. I walk towards te door way and push myself past my dad. "Steve, let him explain. Please." Daniel Pleads. I continue to walk out. I stare at my shoes. I press the down botton on the panel. BING.  The golden elevator doors swiftly open, as if they know that I needed to get away from this floor, my dad, and Daniel. I think of words to describe what I am feeling suddenly II here my Aunts voice "Describe what you feel, Steve. In words." I think of the words. Betrayal. Fear. Anger. Sadness. Confusion.        

I step out of the elevator. Walk past the help desk and straight into the allies. I start crying. My eyes have lost control. Hours are going by it seems.  I feel anger all of a sudden. I kick over a trashcan.You kicked over  trashcan, it's broken because of you.  what are you doing to do? I scream. I start sobbing even more. Suddenly I hear a voice behind me, "That's one heck of a scream, you ight?" says someone. Suddenly they touch me. They're a human. I stare say "I'm not fond of human touch, exactly." "Well, bro, I'd hate to break it to you, but you're kinda in the city of love, about 2 miles from the effiel tower." he chuckles and adds "What, your girlfriend break up with you?" "NO!" I scream. "You know girls are stupid. Okay, okay. I maybe only one or two of them aren't." A lift my eyebrows. I spill everything to him. He smiles "You say, Blonde girl the end s of her hair pink, my the name of... Maria?" "Mara, and she's taken by the worst person in the world." "Your dad? What the heck, dude! That's jacked up!" I laugh "No, some dude named Niles. He likes my, girlfriend, Maya." "So he flirts with your ba-" "Really?" I say. "Fine, girlfriend, when Mara  isn't around?" "What's your name, anways?" 'Eric." "Well, I'm Steve." His eyes light up. "Steve, what your last name?" "James." The makes a squeaking noise. "Stand-up Steve. What are you doing here? Your supposed to be in America."



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answered Feb 16, 2020 by pumpkin (677,280 points)
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