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While I stealthily walked across the alley way I saw a distant shadow move against the light. The wind lightly brushed against my face as I wiped the tears of my face. There was nothing I could do. But I had to do this. Kayla saved my life. I had to save hers.

 

In the alley I heard a soft voice saying,”Helena Winifred DiLernia. You're here. How quaint. Trying to save poor Kayla here?”

   “YOU WON'T GET AWAY WITH THIS!” I shuddered as I yelled,

      “Ahh, but you don’t even know who I am.” and the last thing I saw was a lady with a knife.

 




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I really like it! Keep writing!

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