Teddy Bear

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asked Feb 2, 2016 in Poetry by Lou Lou
I was a mouse whispering in a fluffy ear

Telling my confedential secrets that nobody can hear

I snuggle up with the choclate animal

When I am about to visit the dream world

Or something depressed happened near

I can do anything to it

Style, strech, you name it

And it won't say a thing

It's easy to talk to

About the worst problems that happened to me

It would listen politley

Without saying a thing

My feather teddy bear

The fluffy, cozy thing

Which is alive to me

Which has feelings

And a life

My treasured, lovely teddy bear.


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answered Feb 12, 2016 by rae (83,550 points)
edited Feb 12, 2016 by rae

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