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song: i dont do that anymore the black roses aka chloe and nikki

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asked Apr 1 in Other by Princess nikki and chloe the cat

Nikki: Step on my heart and walk into the cold.

Both: When I look at my heart i see all the creases and folds that's how I used to feel but then i started to heal

Chloe: I saw the darkness.

Nikki: started smiling less

Both: BUT I DON'T DO THAT ANYMORE!!!

NIkki: Cuz there's no use walking in the cold when you know your better then that when you know your bold. yeah yeah

(electric guitar plays with drums in the background)

chloe: It seems like the people in my life making my twirl 

Both: BUT IT'S NOT ON ME ITS ON THE PEOPLE IN MY WORLD!!

Nikki: used to cry myself to sleep cuz this is my world 

Nikki: I dont do that any more

Chloe: I dont do that anymore

(slowly ends the song)

Both: i dont do that any moooore

 

 

 

 

commented Apr 2 by BLACK ROSES AKA CHLOE AND nikkI
ty yall alot!!!

also ty luna this posting a song was inspired by one of your pots the luna song btw nikki and i enjoy your posts alot so hearing from you is a big deal for us!!!!


3 Answers

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answered Apr 1 by AnimalCrossingFan
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Really nice lol I am not a musician TOTALLY.

I dont know how to sing...

Well I am good at art at least. *tries to cheer myself up*
commented Apr 5 by black roses aka chloe and nikki
hey dont feel bad were having tryouts to our band plus we can teach you to sing

and if that doesn't work out then chloe will teach you how to play an instrement

right chloe?

chloe: hm huh oh yeah sorry i was looking at the song and i think luna is right My typing is horrible!!! (not that she said that)

nikki: ok.......

chloe: oh yeah ill teach her!!

chloe: but it-

nikki: no! stop chloe u r not charging someone having them smash guitars! plus those guitars are mine im letting u use them!!!

chloe: if u want to learn our ways meet me here on this post on thursday.

byeeeee
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answered Apr 1 by LunaLight (129,010 points)
Good song, could use a chorus and maybe more structured verses though. If you were to turn it into a real song with music, then it would be very short, and choruses typically help lengthen a song. That is the problem with some of my earlier songs. That said, not all songs have a chorus, but they typically make up for it with longer verses or more verses. The song is good but doesn't have a distinction between each verse. There are some grammatical errors too that can make it difficult to understand a couple of lyrics.

Just trying to assist.
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answered Apr 1 by ~Ash~ (89,530 points)
Nice song!

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