https://www.kidzsearch.com/questions/tag/lulumoon Powered by Question2Answer https://www.kidzsearch.com/questions/36600/luna-about-lulumoon I think your character, Lulumoon, is too standoffish. Can you please tone her down a bit? Because she's so &quot;out there&quot; it's possible she may overshadow the other characters. You need to make her a bit more normal so that fits in as a side character (she's not a main, and can't be because the story has already started and we have our 3 mains established). Please edit her a bit. You can keep her eyes and personality, but make her clothes a bit more like Hogwarts (they wear plain robes, and they aren't allowed to wear normal clothes cept on off days). Also, she is sorta overshadowing Asia because she appears so much (she seems to be hanging with Tom a lot). So please when you request her to be in, please tone her actions and everything down.<br /> <br /> &nbsp;<br /> <br /> Hope you understand! I want the mains to stay as main characters, not be pushed off so that Lulumoon can be the main. Fanfiction https://www.kidzsearch.com/questions/36600/luna-about-lulumoon Wed, 31 Oct 2018 11:47:10 +0000