KidzTalk - Recent questions tagged should-i-continue

Cool Cat| Chapter 1 | JazziGrangerRaven<3

Tue, 15 Nov 2016 23:30:57 +0000

Oomph. I sat on the couch like a potato. I was so tired. Just as I was about to sleep, I heard a scream.

Uh oh. Wait, right. I'm not supposed to be here. Oh, all right then. I flop down and waddle to my soft pillow engraved with:

Mr. FluffyPants

Horrible, right? I wish I was a TIGER. Not Mr. FluffyPants.

I fell into a deep sleep. Early the next day, my eyes opened. Food.

GOBBLE. GOBBLE. GOBBLE. Yum yum yum!!! I wish I could replay this moment forever. I love being a cat.

Should I continue?

Chelsea Bixby- The Unheard of Case

Sat, 20 Aug 2016 12:39:59 +0000

Chelsea Bixby-

The Unheard of case

Chapter 1-

Chelsea sat at her bedroom floor staring at photos of her friend, Maggy Lin. A single tear went down her face as a flashback took place.

“LOOK OUT!
Vroom vroom vroom

“AAAAAAAHHHHHH”

Silence.

A lone figure, dead, on the street.

Many noises.

A knock at the door.

“Chelsea?”

Chelsea looked up and saw her mother, a comforting figure, standing there.

‘Chelsea, I know it’s hard, but she’s gone.”

Chelsea looked at her mother with longing eyes.

“I want to bring her back.” She whispered

“I know….” Chelsea’s mom sat next to Chelsea, “but some things you just can’t fix. You can’t rewrite time, Chelsea.”

Chelsea felt her eyes start to water.

“Mom?”

“Yes, Chelsea?”

“Can we go to her grave tomorrow?” Chelsea struggled to say grave.

“Of course.” Chelsea’s mom stood up, “Now Chelsea, no more moping. Time for dinner.”

Chelsea reluctantly stood up and dragged her feet down the stairs to dinner.

The Chapter Of Our Lives- Story of A Brave Young Girl- Chapter 1

Mon, 15 Aug 2016 12:08:04 +0000

Chapter 1-

Taylor walked into the alleyway and quickly looked behind her back. She saw nothing. Good sign. Inside the alleyway, there was nothing, except 2 dumpsters. Taylor looked inside the one on her left and inside, there flapping was a note, flapping in the wind. She opened the flapping note and read.

Taylor, if this is you, PLEASE help.

I'm on my way to Zurich is Switzerland and well,

need your help.

I know you got school and soccer and all that stuff.

But really, can't you help your big bro?

I'll tell you the details later,

come now please!

-Jake, your big bro

Taylor read this note with surprise. Zurich? Switzerland? No, No, No, Way. Taylor ripped the note in half and threw it on the floor. Really! What has Jake ever done for me? She stepped on the note on her way out. Goodbye.

What do you think? Should I continue?