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Hello Vikings, it's me. Carly

(daily dose of Garmarna for the cool kids a-B))

I feel goofy so here is basically a short story I wrote. IK it's crusty but yeah




The Train to Skåne

by Carly
 



It was just the beginning of spring. For 14-year old Ida Kjellsdötter and her 20-year old brother Sören, that could be something good. they were gonna finally be able to visit their parents' cabin in Skåne.

"Wake up brother." Ida exclaimed while she was jumping around. She was has been seperated from her parents when she was 10, and she had to live with her brother ever since.

"What is it?" Sören asked. He got up from bed a few minutes later and got his woodworking tools. He quickly ate breakfast and left to the city of Östersund to pick up his parents.

"we need 2 tickets, one for a child and one for an adult." he said. He gave the train conductor 150 kronar and got in the train.

Even thought he fell asleep on the train, his sister was not the same. She was screaming and jumping around. Ida never left her home in Jämtland and she gets really excited about new expriences.

After 3 hours, The siblings arrived in their parents' farm in Skåne. Kjell and Ingebjørg  were so happy to finally see their children after 4 years of separation.

"I know I could trust you to help little Ida." Said Ingebjørg as she hugged Sören. "and I can't believe you're now in your 20s." said Kjell to his son.

Sören shook everything off and sat down on what used to be his bed. "well, I am thankful that I got the gift to see you again." he said, feeling really happy.

Ida was able to reunite with her old friend, a Norwegian girl named Astrid. They haven't seen each other  since when Ida was 8 and they were finally reunited.

for the next 2 years, Ida and Sören decided to leave Skåne. Ida was now 16, and she was starting her high school education and Sören, now 22 years old got married to a girl named Maj. They enjoyed their great days of being reunited with their family once again, but they know nothing ever lasts forever.




the end


IK THIS IS CRUSTY. I write Non-fiction much more often now, On Kidznet I post articles on Nordic culture and history

bye Vikings


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this is very poggers (yes i say that)
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lol thanks

and its ok



4 Answers

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Wow!

Just wow!

Carly this is AHHMAZING!

Like omg!

U r really good at writing storys!

Xoxo,

Braceletgirl123
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Awesomesauce :]
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fave scene
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All of them x3
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no, which one
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..The end?

I'm sorry, there aren't many to pick from.
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its ok
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IT AINT CRUSTY

ITS THE DOMPLETE OPPOSITE
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YES IT IS
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Fr
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I SAID IT WAS CRUSTY
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NIUHHH

but fr I'm going to send you to self esteem classes ehehhehehehehhehen
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good
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WE NEED YOU TO WRITE A SAIN!!!
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NEI



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