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sorry I haven't been on in a whileeeee

but today I was hanging with coleeeeeeeeeeee at his new house

and yeahhhh >:)

ill post a fit check in a bittttttttttttttttttt

pookies tell me if this is a good esay:

Start Your Argument Here: How Did Slavery Create Tension Among the States Prior to the Civil War?

Because they were traded and people didn't like it and thought it was unfair and cruel to force people to work an that was mostly in the north while people in the south thought it was good and useful for crops And created tension by  the 2 sides having different opinions and that was making people upset that the south had slaves and north didn't and the north thought it would be fair if the south didnt have slaves so then usa would become a slave free state.

Answer 1

Start off with the prompt, and then add your supporting evidence, and then your reasoning. Finish it off by summarizing what you said, and restating the prompt. That's how I write essays, and I have straight A's lol

Answer 2

Start with the topic, then answer it with something opened ended. Make a paragraph supporting the answer, and then another answering the open ends :D

BESTIE I MISSED YOUUUUUU WHERE WERE YOU TOT

I have no right to ask that due to my 4 day disappearance, but we don't talk about that 

Can't wait to see more of your posts aa-

Comments

all good lol

I was talking a mental break cuz my best friend is moving away to Florida this summer

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Oh no

Welp,

Nothing you can do about that except to enjoy the time you have left with them, wish them well, and play when can I see you again by owl city :3

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ok :)

Answer 3

Maybe don't start with 'because' and make a firm claim, add more pieces of evidence and analyze it.

Answer 4

It's a bit of a run on sentence lol maybe add some punctuation

Comments

I don't really see how its a run on sentence honestly that doesn't make too much sense to me because it doesn't really look like a run on sentence and I don't understand how you'd think that because honestly how is that a run on sentence it does not look like one I'm telling you bro that is not a run on sentence I'd say theres plenty of punctuation so like how do you think that's a run on sentence because I honestly do not agree with that opinion because I just don't think that's a run on sentence need I say more I just don't agree brother I don't think that's a run on sentence

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lol

Answer 5

Add more. You wrote to little, I don't the teacher's gonna like that.

Comments

I submitted that and its our final >:D I'm falling social studies HHEHE

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RIP :(