wright a song contest!!!!

Question

wright a song by September 11 i will be the judge along with my besties (from school they r on here as well) ivy and sav

Comments

Can you do double entries?

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Mmmm, oh

Mmm, yeah

Mmmmmm, yeah, yeah

Mmmm, oh

Mmmm, oh

Mmmmm, Heyyyy

(Verse 1)

Baby, I just don't get it

do you enjoy being hurt?

I know you smell the perfume

The makeup on my shirt

You don't believe his storys

You know that their all lies

Bad as you are, you stick around

And I just don't know why

(If I was your man) Baby you'd

(Never worry 'bout) What'd I'd do

(I'd be coming home) Back to you

Every night doing you right

(You're the type of women) Who deserves good things

(Fistful of diamonds) Handful of rings

(Baby your a star) I just wanna show who you are

You should let me love you let me be the one too

Give you everything you want and need

Baby, good love and protection

Make me your selection

Show you the way love's supposed to be

Baby you should let me (Love you)

Love you, Love-e-e you, Yeah

(Verse 2)

Listen, You're true beauty's description

Looks so good that it hurts

You're a dime plus 99 and it's a shame, don't even know what you're worth

Everywhere you go they stop and stare 'cuz your bad and it shows

From your head to your toes out of control baby you know,

(If I was you're man) Baby you'd

(Never worry 'bout) What'd I'd do

(I'd be coming home back to you) Every night doing you right

(You're the type of women) Deserves good things

(Fistful of diamonds) Handful of rings

(Baby you're a star) I just wanna show who you are

You should let me love you

Let me be the one too

Give you everything you want a need

Oooh, baby good love and protection

Make me you're selection

Show you the way loves supposed to be

Baby you should let me

You deserve better girl, (You deserve better)

We should be together girl, (Baby)

With me and you its whatever girl, hey

So can we make this thing ours?

You should let me love you

Let me be the one too

Give you everything you want and need

Good love and protection

Make me your selection

Show you the way love's supposed to be

You should let me love you

Let me be the one too

Give you everything you want and need

Good love and protection

Make me your selection

Show you the way love's supposed to be, yeah

Let me love you

Thats all you need baby

Btw yall I'm a girl I'm not Bi or Gay I was just letting you guys know because my username can be used for a girl or boy and I just like the song thats why I chose it TYYY

Answer 1

(Verse 1)
In the darkness, feeling strong,
I rise up, ready to belong.
A fire burning deep inside,
Unleashing power, can't be denied.

(Pre-Chorus)
With every step, I feel the thrill,
A warrior's heart, an iron will.
I'm on a journey, chasing dreams,
Pushing through, breaking free, it seems.

(Chorus)
I've got the fire, burning bright,
A fighter's spirit, ready to ignite.
In the heat of battle, I'll never tire,
I'm unstoppable, like the eye of the tiger.

(Verse 2)
Through the struggle, I'll find my way,
Fear won't hold me, not today.
I'll face the challenge, head held high,
Conquer mountains, touch the sky.

(Pre-Chorus)
With every step, I feel the thrill,
A warrior's heart, an iron will.
I'm on a journey, chasing dreams,
Pushing through, breaking free, it seems.

(Chorus)
I've got the fire, burning bright,
A fighter's spirit, ready to ignite.
In the heat of battle, I'll never tire,
I'm unstoppable, like the eye of the tiger.

(Bridge)
No obstacle can break me down,
I'll rise above, wear the crown.
I'll fight with passion, fight with grace,
No challenge I can't embrace.

(Chorus)
I've got the fire, burning bright,
A fighter's spirit, ready to ignite.
In the heat of battle, I'll never tire,
I'm unstoppable, like the eye of the tiger.

(Outro)
I'll keep on fighting, never back down,
With determination, I'll wear the crown.
I'll rise up, soar and inspire,
Unstoppable, like the eye of the tiger.

Comments

I've been waiting for you to find this. What took you so long?

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WOW I LOVED IT u have a REALLY good chance of winning

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Thanks

Answer 2

                                                   mascara

You left me hollow

Wrapped up in this sorrow

How could you?

Your cologne still sits on my bed

Something I greatly resent

But some part of me knows that's not true

Anything that I can find

Past texts, gifts that you made mine

or at least the gifts you didn’t take back

I miss every second of you

And how you’d always do

a beautiful gesture, but I guess you’re a jester

because the real joke’s on me

The joke is on me

And now you’ve left

and my mascara is coming down my cheek

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You used to say

“I’ll always dedicate my day

to making you happy”

You made me a promise 

Three words you never meant

And now, you sit back happily laughing

Anything that I can find

Torn-up pictures, my peace of mind

If that's even possible now

 

I miss every second of you

And how you’d always do

a beautiful gesture, but I guess you’re a jester

because the real joke was me

The joke is me

And now you’ve left

and my mascara is coming down my cheek

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And you say that it’s my fault

You made me feel so insecure

You said “Nineteen’s just too old”

When you used to say that made me mature

I used to think that it was my fault

That the reason you left was because of me

But I’m not gonna let you keep me down

And take my dignity!

And now you’ve left

and I could never be more happy

 

 

 

Comments

I love it it shows how we let boys take us for granted but really we don't need them!

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PREACH!

Answer 3

This is supposed to be a stupid song about a girl (me rip) in middle school and I think it is the most random song ever but I had fun making it up so HERE WE GO

Expectations

You used to say that we were best friends

But apparently I’m trash and you’re now with the trends 

The bathroom stalls are the place I run to cry

Except the graffiti on the walls just make my eyes fry

Every piece of homework is weighing on me like a brick

Apparently I’m flat, that homework did the trick

I’M BEING WEIGHTED DOWN BY EXPECTATIONS (expectationsss)

I’M GONNA DROWN IN THE EXPECTATIONS (expectationsss)

“GET SOME MAKEUP, WEAR A DRESS, THEN I’LL HATE YOU EVEN LESS”

I’LL NEVER MEET YOUR expectations.

Now all of the boys are always “so so cute”

Everything I should say is “slay” “ew” or “oooooh!” 

While the other kids are laughing ‘bout Shrek 

I’m being glared at- what the HECK!?

Every piece of classwork is weighing on me like a brick

Apparently I’m flat, the classwork did the trick

I’M BEING WEIGHTED DOWN BY EXPECTATIONS (expectationsss)

I’M GONNA DROWN IN THE EXPECTATIONS (expectationsss)

“DON’T BE A PICK ME, EAT SOME MORE, GET YOUR CLASSWORK DONE BY FOUR”

I’LL NEVER MEET YOUR expectations.

I can’t ever be confident in me, myself

Let me go, you given me bad mental health

I’m tired of trying, tired of lying

Tired of going to bed every night crying 

Every persons judgements weighing on me like a brick

But guess what? (uh oh, what the fri-)

I’VE NEVER REALLY LIKED YOUR DUMB EXPECTATIONS

I DON’T GIVE A FLIP ABOUT YOUR DUMB EXPECTATIONS

HOW BOUT YOU GO GET A LIFE? HOW BOUT YOU LISTEN TO ALL THOSE LINES?

I’ll never ever meet your expectations.

Comments

I LOVE IT you have a really big shot in wining that reminds me SO much of 6th-grade me!!

Answer 4

We were huntin' boys, we were fightin' boys

In our patched uniforms of blue--

We marched, we rode, we swam, oh, we ran the forest through.

Our Spencers were new and our blood was young;

Younger than we ever knew:

But oh Johnny I swear, my first shots weren't at you.

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Oh Johnny I took your home, your life,

oh Johnny I took your soul--

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life,

oh Johnny I took your soul.

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We went in the fields oh Johnny,

Your gray jacket matched the mornin' dew

We went in the fields but of Johnny I swear:

My first shots weren't at you.

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Oh Johnny I took your home, your life,

oh Johnny I took your soul--

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life,

oh Johnny I took your soul.

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Ten times did I load my musket,

Once did I make my shot

Oh, Johnny; that just happened to

The bullet that 'chou caught

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Oh Johnny I took your home, your life,

oh Johnny I took your soul--

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life,

oh Johnny I took your soul.

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I watched that round pierce your heart:

A skinny gray oak and a silver-tipped dart--

I watched that round pierce your heart:

A skinny gray oak and a silver-tipped dart--

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Oh Johnny I took your home, your life,

oh Johnny I took your soul--

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life,

oh Johnny I took your soul.

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Oh Johnny I took your home, your life,

oh Johnny I took your soul--

Oh Johnny I took your home, your life,

oh Johnny I took your soul.

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Actually pretty meaningful lyrics if you've figured out what they're about and the story they tell.

Comments

wow that was really good You have a real shot at winning!!

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Can you please tell me the meaning of this song?

Without context is just sounds like one guy shot another and thats it x3

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i am using a school computer if I wright it and use the thing my principal will get an alert and I will get introbal

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@nobi

It's about the Civil War. The references to Johnny's gray jacket (Confederacy) and whatnot. The name "Johnny" is always used as represent a young fallen soldier in songs (like "Johnny Boy's Bones," "Johnny I hardly Knew Ya," and "Cruel Wars"). Such was Johnny. The narrator is a Union soldier who is young and eager just like his enemy as is thus more connected to him. I actually skipped a couple lines in this version, but they helped to illustrate how he was trying to honor his "flag" but his "dreams were all a lie." The reference to a silver-tipped dart is a musketball and the skinny gray oak is Johnny, lean but strong (common symbol for an oak tree) in his gray uniform. Also y'all might not be obsessed with antique firearms like me, but the Spencer rifle is a seven-shot repeater rifle that Spencer actually has Abe Lincoln himself test fire before Lincoln decided to have them mass-produced for Union soldiers. And also, in the heat and confusion of battle, soldiers would often load their muskets as many as ten times because they would get confused and forget if they loaded it.

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That’s really good. The only problem I have with it is ME. For SOME REASON I sang it to the tune of Wellerman in my head and now Wellerman is stuck in my head

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This made me cry.

I loved it.

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Wow, nice song.

My brother is in the army.

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I tip my hat.

Answer 5

ok I alr wrote a song called Dear Genie ill post it

Comments

plz post it in here