Fair

Question

You say it's fair 

To be the first

You say it's fair

To make them pay

But is it fair

To be the best

And push away the rest

Is it fair to make them pay no matter what they've been through?

 

Answer 1

Beautiful! 

~ Your friend, Wraya <3

Comments

Thank you! This means a lot! :))))

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Just telling the truth! <3

~ Your friend, Wraya <3

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Thank you! Again XD

Any tips on making it better?

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Umm, not really, I suck at writing songs, but I'm good at singing... And also I think it doesn't need anything more.

~ Your friend, Wraya <3

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Ok thanks for your thoughts! :)))))))))

Have you tried writing songs?

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A few times XD they ended up horrible... I kept forgetting the beat I thought of in my head.

~ Your friend, Wraya <3

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Oh, I do that!

Answer 2

Sorry it took me so long to reply. Anyway, This is awesome. I don't know much 'bout poetry \music though. But I think this is very good.

Comments

Thanks! :)  NP

Have you ever though any of my songs where bad?

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I know the question isn't for me, but I never thought a single one of your songs sucked.

~ Your friend, Wraya <3

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I mean some were unfinished or kind of short, but other than that I thought they were awesome ! I tried writing music a while back. Just gotto say . It sucked.

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Thank you! I have thought some of my songs sucked though...:\

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Yes that's my prob with this one. Oh your probably to hard on yourself. I didn't really like most of these I wrote but ya'll love them so...

Post some of yours I'll read them I bet there great!