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in Other by 🪞 Light Weaver (77.7k points)

I wrote a new story, and added a little of my old one.

The insufferable thorns cut into her arms as she knelt on the forest bed. Her eyes glistened as his footsteps became audible. He knelt beside her, calmly whispering in her ear, holding her so gently as if she were fragile. The moon shone above them, creating a warm blanket of starry light. Shadows lurked underneath them, dancing in the rhythm of their movement. In the tender embrace of one another, they found solace and comfort. The weariness of their journey, both physical and emotional, faded away as they surrendered to the blissful oblivion of sleep. The world around them receded, becoming a distant hum as they cocooned themselves in the warmth of their love. Their fingers entwined as they watched the endless splendors of the night. Dreams and desires merged, dancing in their subconscious, painting vibrant pictures of the life they longed to create together. Then the sun arose, and adrenaline flowed through their veins once more, to yet again repeat the night before. 

by 🪞 Light Weaver (77.7k points)
You can add constructive feedback! Also, I know that their are a LOT of writers on kt, I would love to see what they think.

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by 👑 Grand Master (2.22m points)
 
Best answer
Your a fantastic writer.

Not to be annoyingly promoting my own stuff, but I have a story called The Corvettefan Show.
by 🪞 Light Weaver (77.7k points)
Thank you!

And yes, I saw all of your writing, including the corvettefan show,

I enjoyed it very much, you should definitely keep writing!

The show in specific is actually really good, as if a real interview, ngl I thought it was at first lol.
by 👑 Grand Master (2.22m points)
Um actually its YOU'RE a fantastic writer.
But this is actually a great story you've written.
by 🪞 Light Weaver (77.7k points)
Thanks!
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by 💫 Luminary (188k points)
ok i would read i, but im about to go to bed, remind me in the morning
by 🪞 Light Weaver (77.7k points)
Ok! Reminder, lol.
by 💫 Luminary (188k points)
Ok thanks I shall now read it
by 💫 Luminary (188k points)
It's good!!!
by 🪞 Light Weaver (77.7k points)
thanks!
by 💫 Luminary (188k points)
your welcom
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by 🌠 Star Seer (963k points)
this is sosososososo good!!!!!!
by 🪞 Light Weaver (77.7k points)
tysm!
by 🌠 Star Seer (963k points)

ofc!!!!heart

by 🪞 Light Weaver (77.7k points)

...giggle

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by 💫 Luminary (199k points)
AI
by 🌠 Star Seer (963k points)
1
ur ai
by 🪞 Light Weaver (77.7k points)
1
no it's not ai, I wrote this myself, geez
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by 📜Sage (1.36m points)
Hm very cool :)
by 🪞 Light Weaver (77.7k points)
ty!

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