Chapter One of Dragons

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Dragon

She grumbled, rubbing her sleepy eyes while the other dragons looked at her, waiting for  her to wake her sleepy eyes. The other dragons grinned, one about to push her over from the nest she laid in. "Okay then," said one dragon, leaving the cave with frustration. The others looked, as the still asleep dragon snored. Rust, a green scaled dragon sighed, holding his breath. One pushed her, making her open her eyes, and all of the dragons led in shock and happiness, as they left their frustrations. "What did you want?" she asked, still rubbing her eyes. "For you to wake up!" Yelled the crowd, as she came to a sudden reality. "Okay, okay" she helped herself up, making the dragons happy. "Princess Silver is awake!" yelled the crowd, making Silver grunt. She pushed the crowd, heading over to a lake, leaving the comfort of her home. She washed herself, as dragons waited.

As she was hungry, a chef dragon came over with meat. "Thank you" Silver took the meat, eating it. She sighed, as she was hungry. Once she was done, she headed to her friends. She walked in the forest, hoping to get to her friend, Heat's cave.

Once she was there, Heat's mother greeted her in kindly. "Hello! Come in, are you hungry?" Heat's mother asked. "Actually, I just ate, but thanks!" Silver headed in, seeing Heat playing around. "Heat, Silver is here!" Heat looked over, happily running over. "Hello Silver! Glad to see you!" he hugged her, making the the two dragons smile. "Want to go to the lake?" asked Silver. "Sure!" Heat went over to his pile of leaves. "Okay, now lets go!" he smiled, following Silver to the lake.

 

Hi! This is just a first chapter of something, I honestly don't know what I made...but I hope you liked it anyways!
asked Oct 10, 2018 in Fiction by Unicorn Fluff


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*Gives the approval thumbs up to contine*
answered Oct 12, 2018 by Butter
Are you okay butter?
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I like it, but can you add some more stuff going on, and put more detail in each paragraph? Not meaning to be mean in all, I just want to see another great chapter!! Just some advice that I hope you take into consideration.
answered Oct 12, 2018 by knight

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