5 votes
193 views
in Other by 🔮 Warlock (56.8k points)

Okay! So about the writing you guys had quite the issue of needing access so...I'm just going to write it all that I have rn for you peoples! and you can give me feedback a-=

so this is how it looks right now bucktooth 

     ☆*:..。. .。.:*☆      Outreach Heaven ☆*:..。. .。.:*☆

                                                            [inspired by “I Cannot Reach You”]

 Oh, his dearest childhood friend,Ryuk, such a shame he moved to the city when he was 10: yet sometimes fate has other love stories to bloom like petals of the sakura trees. One particular morning felt…off to Fujisaki, perhaps it could be the skittish feeling of a test coming, whatever it was it had to be crucial. The school bell rang rhythmically 

so what do you think??O_o

Nana out! moneyface

3 Answers

1 vote
by 🌙 Enchanter (491k points)
Okay... it's a start. I personally am not a fan of the simile you used and that colen should be replaced with a comma, but other then that, seems interesting :D
by 🔮 Warlock (56.8k points)
1

it was lowkey i typo oops a-^^but yeah for sure THANKU!!

2 votes
by 🪐 Master (1.79m points)

okayyy

i like it!!

lwk expect an answer bomb sometime this month or next cuz I gotta get caught up with whatever ppl are postingT_T

by 🔮 Warlock (56.8k points)
2
Okay okay yepper pepper i'll prepare!!! And I get it dw also thanku!!
1 vote
by 🌟 Mystic (389k points)
I think it's going well :D

Very cool!!
by 🔮 Warlock (56.8k points)
1
THANKU THANKU

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