Note: This is the farthest I've ever made in writing a story on here ! Oh yeah and please criticize my writing so I can do better. Don't be mean
Crash ! "What was that ?" I asked , My Childlike fear creeping back . He made a small Um sound and looked at the Door that led in this room. I Just noticed that there wasn't any other doors besides the door The boy took me through. Suddenly .... Knock Knock. I gulped. "Quick get in the tunnel ! " He said alarmingly. I said matter -of-Factly "It could be my Grandfather " . Although inside of me I knew I was wrong." Linny ,"He said "Just trust me." I asked all sassy like "how would you know ?" Your Stubborn you know "He Said annoyed. I stared at him. He stared at me with his Icy blue eyes .As if on cue everything happened at once . The guy that was in the shop when we went in this room burst through the door and The boy Shoved me in the tunnel. Before I slid down to the point I couldn't hear I heard commotion. I didn't know what was happening.
That tunnel ,or slide ,took ages to get down.
Once I reached the end .I saw a room the size of a Trailers that seemed to be a main room. A large screen was placed in the center next to two slightly smaller ones. There was also a Desk with a Computer from the 90s and a laptop. It was also pretty dirty ,but looked like people lived here .I'm sorry I'm not really good at describing things.
I decided to look around since I couldn't go back up the tunnel. There were Two doors that led out of this main room. A man walked in. I hid behind a file cabinet and studied the man. He had raven ,black hair , tanned skin like he had been working in the sun all day, and Brown eyes. From his face I could see he looked kind, Intelligent, Fatherly, familiar, and. Wait He wasn't familiar I knew him. He wad my dad.
