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Short Story Fiction Essay

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asked Oct 6, 2016 in KidzSearch Contests by Cow Boy (32,570 points)

   Once upon a time in the land of Kiiyros, a young dwarf named Tico worked hard to forge his first sword. After a few mistakes, his instructor told him that the sword was good enough. When Tico got home he looked for his parents but could not find them. He then saw a note on the sofa.

This is what it said: Due to crimes against the King of  Kiiyros, this family has been arrested  by the Royal Guard.

   When Tico read this he was filled with rage. He always had a dislike for the King, but now more than ever. But luckily for Tico, there was a Rebellion against the royal people. Tico then went to a small Rebel camp and signed up to join.

   Seven years later, he was a top commander of the Rebel army. Though he was very high in rank, he was not the highest. There were still two officers higher than him. So this meant he still had to take orders. But there was one order he couldn't understand. The orders were ''Go invade the capitol''. Tico did not like this, for the last time there was an attack on the city, he lost lots of troops. Tico complained about his orders to the Supreme Commander, and said he would not do it. The Commander then suspended his command, and condemned him to one month in prison. After  this, Tico was angry with the Rebels. Tico later left the rebels and joined the King's army.



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