First, what I thought about each story -
LLM's entry- Good moral of the story, good use of descriptive language, could use more work towards creating a bigger problem and solution. But overall, a good story.
BGPearl's entry- Great job on the story, good use of descriptive language, as well as using italics for thinking, not too much for moral, but it remind me more of a story with a jack (the one character who uses logic and always lucky). Overall, great story.
KnightStar's entry- Great job on descriptive language, not much for story or moral. Overall an okay story.
Gemhearts entry- Great job on descriptive language, good as a story, not much for moral but since it was a scary story they often don't have one. Good use of an urban legend, little bit off for the theme given though. Overall, a good story.
1st. BGPearl's entry
2nd. Gemhearts entry
3rd. LLM's entry.
4th. KnightStar's entry.