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Alternate Universe

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Her smile his under the table, as she could barely breath. She felt the constant ponder of, how could she get here? First thing she knew, she was in her house, eating cereal waiting for the bus. She can't remember it, at least.

She continued to try to make her breathing slow, but the dusty table made her sinuses blow up. About to sneez, she took her finger and put it over her nose. She sighed in relief.

She then felt a sudden coldness come on her back, as she looked over, but for sone reason no one was there. She felt someone touched her shoulder, coldly.

She swished back to see, but still no one.

She looked back to where she was, only to see herself. She was startled, and almost to a lost of words. Her, but she was there. How was it possible?

But, she seemed different, more creepy and chilling.

Thud.

Something snapped and that all she remembers, except waking up in another strange world.

 

Hi! This is for the alternate universe contest for Luna Midnight. I hope you like it!
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also recatogorise it as luna's story contest!
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Thanks for reminding me! I just did.



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pretty good! although since it is next weeks theme it would be annouced next week! thanks for understanding! great story!
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