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When I told Mom about my disaster of a day, she was anything but sympathetic.

"Olivia's different, Alice. In fact, I think you should stop playing with Ellie and those girls and more focusing on Olivia, at least until she's adjusted.".

"When will she be adjusted?" I asked.

"Oh, when she's like the other kids I suppose.". That's when I lost it.

"MOM, OLIVIA WILL NEVER BE LIKE THE OTHER KIDS! I'M SICK OF BABYSITTING AND LOSING FRIENDS BECAUSE OF HER!" I screamed so loud the neighbors could hear.

"Alice Siena Taylor! Go to your room!" Mom shouted. "Here Olivia, I made cookies.". But instead of going to my room, I stayed put.

"I'm leaving!" I said, then ran to the garage, got on my bike, and left.



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I love it!
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why is alices last name hayden and olivias is taylor
by (134k points)
Sorry about that! I have spellcheck and it got Hayden mixed up with Taylor!
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by (134k points)

To keep this story going, I need to comments that you want it to keep going. Otherwise, I am going to take it down and start a new story. Btw, the comments have to be from two different people.

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well i think its cool
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Don't think nobody is reading your fantastic writing. I read all of your chapters right now and they're amazing. Please continue Alice and Olivia. Don't take it down!sad




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