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Rise of the Wolves: Chapter 3

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As they went further into the wolfcomes the darker it got. Luna's mom let her go. She sniffed around and found an old torch on the wall that clearly had not been used in a long time. She sniffed a little more and found a match on the ground, oddly unused. Luna's mom picked up the match and struck the wall. Then she lit the torch with the flame. The small flame illuminated the passageway.

   "Why did we come here?" Luna asked. "I always wanted to show you these. They go everywhere you can imagine. But your father never let me show them to you," Her mom replied. "Why?" asked Luna. "He thought they were too dangerous for you," replied her mom. "I'm a tough pup, GRR!" said Luna. Her mom chuckled. "Yes, you are. I wish your father would've seen that,"she said. There was an awkward silence. But the silence was soon broken. They heard a sound of another wolf running. It was coming closer.

                              They were not alone...


Here is my latest chapter. Please comment me for any feedback or ideas. I would very much appreciate anything you have to say.

commented Aug 20, 2019 by lunalovegoodmolly (313,100 points)
This is really good. The wolves seem to be somewhat like humans! The intelligent life of the world!


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answered Oct 5, 2018 by -GEMHeart- (283,730 points)
selected Oct 7, 2018 by LunaLight
 
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Great job, interesting so far.
commented Oct 5, 2018 by LunaLight (99,140 points)
chapter 4 is up now

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