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Shadow reformed into a shadow and crept into Luna and Celestia's cell. then he reformed into a pony. "Hello Luna," he said. "Shadow," Luna said with alarm. "What are you doing here? I thought you left me?" "Who is this, Luna?" asked Celestia. "An old friend, or at least we used to be..."Luna replied.

Shadow: I thought you said you'd never leave me

Luna: I thought you said the same

Shadow: You left me for a thousand moons

Luna: it's not that simple

Shadow: oh but it is.

Both:I put my faith in you and you let me down, you left me for many moons.

Luna: Why did you turn away?

Shadow:Why did you go away?

Luna: There was nothing that i could say! Trust me I want to stay!

Shadow: Why should i trust you?! I loved you more than you know

Luna: If you did, why did you go?

Both: I put my faith in you and you let me down. how can trust you again? you left and you lied, without saying goodbye. Why did you lie?!

Shadow:I watched you go away, Celestia fault to say

Luna: the blame was mine alone as was the deed

Shadow: Why did you do it? Why did you go away?

Luna: I wanted to be equal, but that's for another day

(following part's are at the same time)

Shadow: I put my faith in you, you left for 1,000 moons. I loved you,  I didn't want it to be this way. I have to say goodbye, but before I go, do you still love me?

Luna: I put my faith in you, I left for 1,000 moons. I loved you, I got banished away. I have to say goodbye, but before I go, do you still love me?


This song I wrote instead of magpiepony.


"of cource I love you, Shadow," said Luna. "And I love you, Luna," said Shadow."WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?!" said Celestia. "I will explain sister," said Luna, gazing into Shadow's eyes.

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by 🌙 Enchanter (419k points)
 
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This is really good, Luna!
by 💫 Luminary (171k points)
do you like the song i wrote?
by 🌙 Enchanter (419k points)
Yes! Great!
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by 💫 Luminary (171k points)
sorry the ending was cheesy. I wrote the song in here. it wasn't part of magpiepony's story.

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