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My entry, sorry it's short. 



Lost

 

 

It was forlorn, desolated part of the town that she had traveled down. The roads were cobblestone, path gritting against her shoes as she pressed against it slowly, hands in her velvet colored sweater and blue blobs faced to the pure darkness ahead of her. She had been walking for what felt like hours, her body ached as one street lamp glowed dimly. It was tall, strange from the rest burned out ones, and the fire was hastily moving, it’s yellow flames turning to a deep red as her eyes drifted from it quickly to face the same road. By her side was a town, though knocking her pale palms against the wooden, hard doors didn’t help. Her eyes were purple and red, her hair messily done as she almost plopped on the same floor.

 

It was cold, ice felt like it was stinging on to her skin as she scrunched her body up, now taking out a cigarette lighter she had used earlier. It was a crimson red, in her figment of imagination, it seemed like deep red, thinking blood trickled down the tip of it as she lit up a small fire to guide her way. She coughed loudly and rapidly, one by one it came spewing out as she saw an icy flame come from her mouth. Her hands attracted to the fiery light, now a burn appeared in her own icy orbs. It desolated quickly and deathly almost as what felt like someone had blown it out, now the girl seemed frustrated with this quest.

 

“Please…” she whimpered, waiting for the lighter to light back up, now it did to reveal it’s own azure. She rested her hand over it, sighing in pleasure of the eat over a little part of her hand. She now continued to look around for houses, enough strength to knock firmly and strongly on one door that seemed to be of a two-story russet house. These houses had windows with wood on them, outside more wood chucked out. A creak entered her ears as she looked, overjoyed to see a stern face pee out of the door. The old woman mumbled, now creaking it wider as she grimly asked where this girl was heading. “Nowhere, miss, I’m just trying to find a place to stay.” She quietly said, her voice still incredibly rasp as the lady opened the door to reveal her plump body wrapped in maid’s wear.




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